its decent flash for a begin
As u say ur on the way
First of all it was way to short
the animation was very simple
it wasnt any action, only dialog making it boring
but what i didnt like at all was the character stood still, he didnt move at all while the dialog was going.
other than that ur on the way :)
The next episode will have more action, as the cliffhanger suggests, along with the action will be voices so you aren't distracted trying to read. The protagonist in this one did make little emotes while the talking was going on, but it was hard to see that and read at the same time.
5 stars
the story was very unoriginal and the animation. If you see trough that it was great. cool voice acting.
who cares about originality ? i mean everything is not more original in the world
just like your 5 this is not original you avatar & nicname too are onoriginal
even your english is unoriginal
Good as a first animation
Good as a first animation
but the sounds and repetive punching made it boring
it wasnt animation it was pictures followed by each other
Very simple and lack good graphics
when i hear pico vs darnel i excpect a good fight
I also excpect the characters to fight not sticks
the graphics lacked skill
the perfect recipe for a bad flash
it was okey but could be better
it was okey, but the jokes were to predictable could have been better
awesome work
this is a epic series
awesome work and lip synching
good work! keep it up!
awesome work
awesome work but you could have made it a bit longer :)
Thanks!
I'll make my next one longer.
your epic at flash
that was good animation and fun to see it was epic i am exited to the whole version
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